User:Starryoung/Tobacco mosaic virus/HermiaStudy Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Starryoung and Violettemoonlight


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Starryoung/Tobacco_mosaic_virus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tobacco mosaic virus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

Content that was added seemed to fit in the appropriate section.

Tone and Balance:

Tone was neutral and fit the wiki rules.

Sources and References:

Sources look fine. Latest source was an article published in 2013. Perhaps look for a more recent one?

Organization:

Additions mostly fit where they were placed. Be sure that your sentences flow naturally.

Overall Impressions:

The section on Treatment and Management seemed more complete with your additions. However, the one sentence additions to several sections doesn't seem to add much to the existing article. The work felt like it was spread very thin. Also, it was difficult to determine what you had changed in the article and what was already there. Perhaps make it more clear in the sandbox and delete when moving it over to the actual article.