User:Starshinednights/Elvia Alvarado/Jennylxpez Peer Review

General info
User: Starshinedlights
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Elvia Alvarado
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)