User:Starshinednights/Elvia Alvarado/Omeeezy Peer Review

General info
(Starshinednights)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User talk:Starshinednights/Elvia Alvarado:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Elvia Alvarado:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, the author, (StarShinedNights) has done a commendable job in capturing the essence of Elvia Alvarado's life, highlighting both her struggles and triumphs. The narrative effectively portrays the dichotomy between her origins and her ultimate achievements. The inclusion of intimate details adds depth to the article, creating a compelling picture of Elvia's journey.

However, their talk is compiled with a format for updating the article and includes technical suggestions and a more directional approach for themselves to absorb and update upon later. The author is focus on adding more specific content as it seems like this is just a "rough draft" and format for what they will add. They have listed a variety and grand amount of content that they will add, adding more than 50% of new content to the prior Elvia Alvarado wiki.

In fact, they do a great job at organizing and formatting what additions and content they will add where. Some of the directions they have listed include; "List the names of children & with whom Elvia procreated with, Expand on family structure and dynamic, Add approximate ages and years, creating a timeline of her life rather than an informal bio, and even spelling out numbers." Overall, I feel like they are at a good position for the rough draft and have a great foundation within their talk page. This makes me optomistic and eager to read the final additions.

Great job.