User:Starstorm101/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article?
I am choosing to evaluate this article because it is a perfect example of why we are doing this project. There is a clear lack of information on this mayor and I think it is important to have easy access to plentiful information about our leaders.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article is quite short. While it delivers the information that it has in a concise manner, there isn't much information, which is quite indicative of the entire article. As previously mentioned, this Wikipedia article lacks content, such as examples of what bills Andy Schor sponsored during his time in the Michigan House, or an overview of how he came here and joined our government. The information that is presented is told in a neutral tone of voice, with no opinions on Schor or on the content expressed. Most of the sources are unbiased, as they are just public records kept by Ingham County; however, one source seems to be some Jewish news source, which lacks an "about" page, even when one clicks on the "about" tab, which makes this source questionable, at best.

Overall, this article is incomplete, lacking a lot of information and sources; however, there is a solid foundation for a strong and informative Wiki page.