User:Starvin Bandit/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
H/PJ-38 130mm naval gun - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article as it showed up in my Wikipedia recommended edits, and it seemed like a good place to start. This page matters as describes the development of China's naval artillery weapons. My first impression was that there was not much information presented on the topic of the H/PJ-38 130mm naval gun.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section of this article presents some valuable information on the topic but seems to be worded in an odd fashion. This section also does not provide much background information on the topic. The content of the article is up-to-date and contains information that is relevant to the topic. The article maintains a neutral tone and does not appear to contain any biases. The sources presented in the article do not all work, so the credibility of these sources, and the content taken from them, cannot be evaluated. This article could use more citations the help to build up more background on the topic. The article did appear to have some grammatical errors. This article could definitely benefit from the use of images to help the reader depict the naval ship and the guns on it. There are not yet any discussions on the articles talk page going yet. The article is a part of the wikiproject China as well as the military history wikiproject and has been rated as a start-class by both.

Overall, this article could use some work and is currently in an undeveloped state. The article needs to include more background information on the topic as well as related information, such as the munitions used. The article would greatly benefit from some visuals to help the reader understand the topic as well as make it more appealing to the viewers.