User:StayClassy81/Lebanon Pioneer Cemetery/StaceySmithOSU Peer Review

Prof. Smith comments on first draft of the Wikipedia article
Hi Jessica,

I'm writing my comments on your first draft of the Wikipedia article here.

Lead:

Mention that the cemetery is on the National Register of Historic Places

I would put more about the historical significance here in the lead.

Content:

Who was Sarah Suttle? What were the other burials? I assume that you plan on developing the content on burials more (which is a good idea).

I would eliminate "Key Dates" and simply incorporate all of these important events into a regular narrative of the site's history.

Why did the city of Lebanon take over? Who did upkeep of the cemetery before then?

Style:

Be sure to proofread for capitalization and spelling. Capitalize "Victorian" and spell "eroding" with only one r, for instance.

References:

It seems that you're still pretty early in your research process as there is only one source so far. A big task for you over finals week will be to develop your research to include more sources and to give greater detail on the history of the cemetery.