User:Stella88E/Fast fashion/Ivy Mon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Stella88E


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Stella88E/Fast fashion


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fast fashion

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the draft is well written and has the features of a Wikipedia article but you could definitely improve your article by doing spelling checks. I saw a few spelling errors here and there but once it's fixed the article would be flawless. ~