User:Stellaeve1515/Ana Castillo/Guadalupequinones Peer Review

I think that you should include a short introduction about Ana Castillo, but I just checked her Wikipedia page and it seems like her biography is already pretty extensive. Ana Castillo

I think that the approach of talking about her work is a good one, but I suggest changing the titles into something more specific. Perhaps themes in her work or just the title of the piece you talk about.

Also, this sentence "addresses the cruel, heartbreaking, and unfortunately, perpetual crimes that happen" seems a bit wordy. Perhaps you could shorten.

When you use the title of the book "The Guardians" it should be italicized or under quotations since it is the title of her work.

I really like you analysis of the crisis at the border, but I would also suggest to include Ximena, Gabo's mothers story in this. She was a victim of a femicide at the Mexican-American border. I think it would make you argument stronger, but also bring light to the conditions for immigrants based on gender.

I think this is a good start and I am not sure if you analysis is just this piece or other works by Castillo, but I do think that there could be a more comprehensive analysis of Regina and Gabo's life on the American side of the border and the struggles that come from immigration through Gabo's perspective and actions.

The references look good, but I think you should do numbered in-text citations. It shows where your information is from and adequately credits sources.

-Guadalupe