User:Stellasun666/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: German electronic music
 * Article Evaluation
 * It only has a one sentence lead and other content of this article are some words with links. There is no images and links and I think it needs many more improvements.
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Option 2

 * Article title: Haidilao
 * Article Evaluation:
 * Not precise enough for the most popular hot pot restaurant in China. Haidilao is not only a hot pot brand, but also a pop culture in China. The sources are mostly from press release, but I do not sure if it is a big problem for a restaurant article in wikipedia.
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Option 3

 * Article title: Music of Germany
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is well-organized and have many details of German music. The sources are reliable, most from books and academic papers. I found some typos and the lead is too long and include too many details that can be easily found in the content list of this article.
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Option 4

 * Article title:Music of Detroit
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 * This article is good and well-written. The lead is clear and short and other parts are not too long, but still have enough information. The sources are reliable but not that up-to-date, maybe because the music flourish of Detroit was in many years ago.
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Option 5

 * Article title: Acid techno
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article only has the lead and the lead is clear and well-written. But it needs to include more contents, such as the history, different divisions and popular producers. The sources are reliable, but this article needs to improve more.
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