User:Stepagco/Copolymer/TROLLSworldtour Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Stepagco


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Stepagco/Copolymer?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Copolymer

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:


 * lead has not been updated

Content:


 * content added is relevant to the topic
 * content is up to date

Tone and Balance:


 * content added is neutral

Sources and References:


 * lots of sources have been used
 * references are limited in the "properties" section - large bodies of text have only ~ 1-2 citations
 * would suggest adding citations here
 * references are current and relevant, and support the article
 * links work

Organization:


 * content added is well organized
 * would suggest editing to improve clarity of sentences/make writing more concise

Images and Media:


 * none added

Overall Impressions:


 * sections added in this sandbox improve the understanding of the topic, and improves the overall quality of the article
 * properties section is an important addition, as not everyone is knowledgeable about how polymers can be modified
 * update the lead!!
 * improvements to the contents added could be done by adding images, increasing in-text citations, and just general editing to improve sentence clarity and conciseness
 * can also look into increasing info on the published page, such as descriptions for different polymers that are only 1 sentence long