User:Steph.sparks/Cross-cultural communication/Morgan Kennon Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Steph.sparks
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Cross-cultural communication

Lead
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Lead evaluation
This user has made several notes on the lead. The lead in the current article is very informational and holistic in describing the concepts of cross-cultural communication.

Content
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Content evaluation
This user is planning on elaborating on the content by adding more information about Charles Berger's Uncertainty Reduction Theory. I think elaborating more on the foundations of these theories and how they all connect will help develop this article.

Tone and Balance
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This is one of the most important elements of a good article; but one of the hardest to develop. While the article is very informational, I think that the article is lacking flow. I think that some literary elements like tone would help elevate the article and the overall point further.

Sources and References
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This user has notes to add several new historical/foundational resources to this article. The more articles an article has the more validity it has. This user has a few reliable sources ready to ad already!

Organization
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As of now, this user only has notes as guiding points as to how the article should be laid out. This has the important questions the article should answer laid out in the order they should be answered. For instance, this user asks the question "What is being discussed?" "Who first discussed it?" and "Where is it being used?" These are good fundamental questions and I think that it is a smart way to organize the article.

Images and media evaluation
This user has not added any additional pictures or images yet. The current article includes several relevant images in the current article that tie in key concepts of cross-cultural communication.

Overall impressions
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This user has very good notes and plans for additions to the original article. I think that once this user elaborates on these notes, they will have great additions to make to the original article. The only suggestion I have is that this user try to improve the flow and readability of the original article.