User:Steph.tsaii/National Kaohsiung Center for the Arts/Meganshw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Steph.tsaii


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Steph.tsaii/National_Kaohsiung_Center_for_the_Arts?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * National Kaohsiung Center for the Arts

Evaluate the drafted changes
The introduction well introduced the art centre and gave some insight of what it contains. It is concise and gave reader some direction of what to expect for the contents. However, I feel like the second paragraph of the lead section and the introduction paragraph of the architecture section has some overlaps that might not be necessary. For the history part, you can consider making the awards part a new paragraph. It would be nice if you can add more information about what performances the are centre have or some famous performances in the past to give reader a clue on what the art centre is about and what to expect. Overall the draft is well-done and can elaborate more on the specialty of the art centre. For example, the reason of it winning many awards.