User:StephMSU/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Andy_Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because he is the mayor of Lansing which is relevant to where I live.

Evaluate the article
I think the lead section is concise and relevant. The first sentence is a good introduction of the article without being overly detailed. The introduction does not have any information that is not in the article.

The content of this article is good and tells me a lot about the mayors work history. However I would like to know more about his time as mayor since he has been in office for four years now, and there is relatively little information about his time in office. Information about his policies and what his office has done would be helpful information to be included.

The tone of the article is very neutral, I don't believe it has been swayed in favor of any group or policy.

The Organization of the page is chronological and is very clear. I like the way the information is formatted and it creates a really good flow. The language is easy to read and I did not notice any grammatical errors.

There is only one picture on the page and it has a caption but it does not say when the photo was taken. The image is laid out in an appealing way. It appears to be adhering to Wikipedias copy write policies.