User:StephaniePaventy/Zoe-Vonna Palmrose/Tigers900 Peer Review

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StephaniePaventy


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 * Editing User:StephaniePaventy/Zoe-Vonna Palmrose - Wikipedia


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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This is a great start! I like all the information and how it tells why she is important.

The sources you are using are good, especially to start with. It would be interesting to look at her publications she wrote and see what critics/reviewers think of her works. How do people see her? Is she an inspiration in the accounting community or do not a lot of people know about her? What influenced her as a child to do her career, and what is her life outside of work? What does she like to do, and does she have a family? These would be interesting to answer and try to find information about, but currently, your draft looks good!

In the lead section, it covers a lot about what the article is about, but still needs information about how she won awards and had many publications to be updated with the rest of the draft. Also, you could consider putting some of the information in a table, like all of her publications and awards in tables to better organize the draft. Currently, the article is clear, relevant, and concise.

Lastly, you could consider adding a photo, but it isn't required. You have a good start, and I learned a lot.