User:Stephmadri12/Crystal Galindo/GreenPanda55 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(I am peer- reviewing Stephmadri12's article draft.)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Stephmadri12/Crystal_Galindo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template )
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article of Crystal Galindo is straightforward and precise, as for the Lead, the writer provides enough detailed information that perfectly describes the artist's work and background but is not overwhelming in any way.

Content - The writer highlights relevant information to the article and there is no content that is specifically missing.

Tone and Balance - The whole article has a neutral tone to it, nothing seems to be biased. The article does not seem to be underrepresented, the article has and cites important information.

Sources and References - The links in the writer's 'Further reading,' and 'External links,' seem to work and takes one to the page directly. However, in the 'References,' section, the links seem not to work and appeared not to be linked yet. I think it would be helpful if the sources were linked/footnoted in the Introduction and Art paragraph for people to click through the links. But all of the sources tend to be current.

Organization - Each section/topic is divided and organized cohesively and has a nice structural flow. I did not find grammar errors.

Images and Media - The article does not have images, but includes titles and dates of the work with informative descriptions.

The sources included in the article seem to be reliable and supported by secondary sources. My overall impressions is that the article is straightforward and touches base with Wikipedia's requirements and has a nice flow to each given topic. I think what could be improved is making sure the links in the sources section are active and linked as well as adding footnotes in the introduction and art section can also be helpful. Other than that, this article was a great read!!