User:Stephmadri12/Crystal Galindo/Lapraucla Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Stephmadri12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Crystal Galindo


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Same as above.

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) For your first sentence, try removing the quotation marks from the word 'confrontational'. Unless it was cited in an interview with the artist or by a critique of the artist's work, it would be easier to read. If you this is a direct quote from the artist explaining her work perhaps cite where you got this information from.
 * 2) Biography- Great biography of her early life and background. The first sentence is a little long. Perhaps divide the sentence in two ex. Crystal Galindo is a Yaqui-Xicana artist who was born and raised in Exeter, Tulare County, California. Galindo lived in the San Fransisco Bay Area and is currently relocated in the East Coast.
 * 3) Artworks- Remember to capitalize the 'x' in 'Xicanas'. And in the fourth artwork series, if the year is not specified you can notate it with 'n.d.' if no date is provided. It is easier than writing out '(the year is not specified within the "Biography" section of the website).'
 * 4) Exhibitions- Watch out for past and present particle endings in these sentences when you describe the exhibitions.

Final thoughts: I think you did an excellent job overall with your article! Her artwork is beautiful and confrontational, just as you ascertained.