User:Stercorarius Parasiticus/Asexual reproduction/DeltaOmegaTen Peer Review

Peer review
A lead section that is easy to understand


 * I'm not sure if you edited the lead section since I'm unable to find the original article on Wikipedia to compare your edits with. However, since I don't think what you've edited is the lead section, this part of the feedback guidelines doesn't apply to you.
 * EDIT: I found the original article! Yep, it seems that the lead section was left untouched.

A clear structure


 * You made a great use of headings! They really clarify your organization and allow you to provide more detailed information without getting cluttered. I like how you have separate sections for Facultative Parthenogenesis and Obligate Parthenogenesis, and you also have subheadings beneath those two forms of parthenogenesis.
 * There are some small grammar/wording errors. For example, underneath Heterogeny it says "regular intervuls" instead of "regular intervals". Very small and quick fixes!

Balanced coverage


 * I can't tell if coverage is balanced since you focused your edits on one section of an article. However, the edits you've made really give me a lot more information than what was originally provided.
 * EDIT: Your edits primarily add new information. There are some parts in the original article that seem sparse, such as the "Inheritance in asexual species" section, so it may be worthwhile to add onto that too.
 * In the first paragraph, you write, "Parthenogenesis occurs in the wild in many plants, invertebrates (e.g. water fleas, rotifers, aphids, stick insects, some ants, bees and parasitic wasps), and vertebrates (some reptiles, amphibians, and fish)." Since you include parentheses with examples after invertebrates and vertebrates, it'd be nice to maintain that consistency and include examples of plants that exhibit parthenogenesis as well.

Neutral content


 * The tone is neutral and factual.

Reliable sources


 * You noted that copy-and-pasting to the sandbox removed the formatting, citations, and media. I had similar technical issues, so I totally understand. Just remember to include the in-text citations and a references list when you're able to retain formatting! You bring in a lot of new information from what appears to be several studies, so it's important to give credit to all of them.