User:Sterling222/Lethal Dwarfism in Rabbits/Frankie2359 Peer Review

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It was difficult to critique this article because it was so well written. Flow and sentence structure was near perfect, and sounded like a “professional” wiki article. I did recommend moving a few sentences or omitting them entirely, as they were mentioned twice in different sections. I also removed the word “sadly” from the beginning of a sentence to keep it objective. Awesome job. -KJ