User:Stevenfigge/Communication privacy management theory/MA2024 Peer Review

General info
'''This article does a very good job of having good structure in the way the information is being shown. I like that from the start you clarify what the theory is you are writing about and how it has a former name and what it now goes by. You describe your subject right away in naming the five core principles that are very crucial to your detailing of the article which goes a long way in really defining what the theory is. I like that there are blue links that you can click on that can connect you with the subjects you are talking about, so that the audience can really get an understanding of each subject you're talking about and feel they can get the information right from your text. I would suggest maybe adding more information about the overall background of your theory in how the author further expanded this theory into changing the name of it and how the theory is looked upon today as compared to when it was first developed. The most important thing you can do to this article is just expand on it more, the information you have right now is very good but to see it be more expanded on with the history of the author could be very interesting to readers like me that want to learn more about the people that develop these theories. I think you have a good article here that could become even better with more time.'''

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)