User:Stevling/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Name of article: Hyperreality
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate: I think that the concept of hyperreality is very interesting and I thought it would be a sort of obscure topic to choose.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Concise

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content up-to-date? Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Mostly
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors? No
 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? No
 * Are images well-captioned? None
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? None
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? None

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic? Ethics questions on how hyperreality exists in our society via video games and other forms.
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects? C-class, No
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class? We haven't discussed hyperreality in class. Talk page discussion is very underdeveloped and discussed with such plain and crude language.

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status? It needs helps from a philosophy expert and editing for less basic language.
 * What are the article's strengths? It presents a holistic picture of the topic with specific sections and examples.
 * How can the article be improved? If more was said about the different views and how it has an effect on our society.
 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed? It is a little underdeveloped, more could definitely be said on this topic.

Optional activity

 * Choose at least 1 question relevant to the article you're evaluating and leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback

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 * Link to feedback: Talk:Hyperreality