User:Sthapa20/Social anxiety/Pgunter99 Peer Review

Hey Sthapa20!

I think your contributions are good and really help improve the article. However, I did notice a few grammatical mistakes.

One of your contributions I noticed that needed a little work was the following:

''Panic attacks can lead to panic disorders,  which is the fear of having a panic attack in public. Other types of disorders they can have anxiety includes social anxiety disorder, generalized anxiety disorder, obsessive compulsive disorders(OCD) different types of phobias and post traumatic stress disorder(PTSD).''

I added a comma in the first sentence, but I am not exactly sure what you're trying to say in the second sentence. Maybe consider replacing they with that? Overall, just double check your work for grammar mistakes and you'll be stellar!

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