User:Sticky MD/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Theistic evolution

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have a special interest in evolution and I find different, including theological, viewpoints about evolution interesting. This topic matters because evolution is arguably the most controversial scientific theory in all of human history because of its blatant contradiction to the establishment of life as propose by the three major Abrahamic religions, and documenting these different viewpoints will provide insight to future generations. My first impression of this article is that it is a well written overview of a rather niche worldview about evolution.

Evaluate the article
Lead

-Good introductory sentence.

-Good overview of sections.-lead only contains relevant information.

-its concise.

Content

-it is relevant content.

-All of the sources are from 2006 or before meaning the information may be out of date.

-Most of the content missing has to do with certain religious groups and their viewpoint. As there are millions of different religious groups each with a unique viewpoint this allows for a lot of expansion.

-Could use perspective from historically marginalized groups.

Tone and balance

-The article seems to be neutral but the talk page is riddled with contentious religious debate and people saying there view is misrepresented which could allow for improvement.

Organization and Writing Quality

-article is a B rated

-could use structural help

overall impressions

-great foundations but with a suitable amount to improve