User:Stokesskye/Affrilachia/Rem00005 Peer Review

I think you did a really good job at remaining neutral. While reading the article, I never felt any sense of bias. I do think you could add a little to the members section, I feel like it is a little short and there must be more members. Maybe you could add another section just about the Affrilachian Artist Project. I think that could add to your article. And, I think the members section is supposed to belong with the Affrilachian Artist Project, so you might want to put that under that section instead of making the members section its own part. Overall, I think your article is really good, you could just use a little more information.

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