User:Stokhi1/Fashion Week/Willandrade24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Stokhi1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Stokhi1/Social media in the fashion industry
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fashion week

Evaluate the drafted changes
I can see that this sandbox has some information with some credible authors. However, the format is written like an essay and is not exactly objective. There is analysis of quotes in this sandbox and I do not feel this is appropriate for the genre of an encyclopedia.