User:Stormont458/Huang Shuqin/FilmIsGreat Peer Review

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 * Stormont458
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Huang_Shuqin&editintro=Template%3ABLP_editintro#Early_life_and_education

Hi Stormont458,

I think you did an amazing job with your article. It is well written and very informative with little to no errors. The Lead did a good job with being informative and concise by telling the reader only the important information about the director. The content is relevant to the topic and up to date. You had a neutral tone, none of your claims were biased and your sources were reliable. You also did a good job summarizing her films and made good use of the picture you added. The only thing that I would maybe change is the second last sentence in Early life and education: "Huang later attended a May Seventh Cadre School, which acted as a labour camp, for five years; two of which were spent under "isolation and surveillance" in a small room without contact from anyone as punishment for her possible involvement in the May 16th Notification in 1966." I would either split it into two sentences or try to make it more concise.

FilmIsGreat (talk) 04:27, 5 November 2019 (UTC)