User:StormyWarlock/Security alarm/Freddy Munoz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

StormyWarlock


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:StormyWarlock/Security_alarm?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Security alarm

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Reading through the article, it explains security alarms very well by how it works and explaining the different types of security alarms. Overall very informative and has a chunks of information through each of the alarms. However there wasn't much added content from the sandbox draft. Perhaps with more content from the draft, it'll be able to be more polished and more information will be helpful. The only parts where I would see more information being helpful is through the types of alarms presented and perhaps there is even more security alarms that isn't already being presented in the article. Overall it's already a strong article it just needs more information.