User:Strawberry4547

Wikipedia Assignments 1-2
Wikipedia Assingment #2

The changes that I would make in an article, would be in the Cleveland High School one. I feel that being a student in that high school, I have experience and knowledge about that school that people should be informed about. The changes that I would make are:

Photos:, I feel that there should be some photos in this article, so people can get a sense of what this school looks like. Maybe some photos of the choir, and sports, so people can see the different activities that do go on.

Wikipedia Assignment #1

[Physical Fitness]: Physical Fitness is an important thing for everyone to have in their lives. It not only helps you stay physically fit, healthy and get into shape. You feel better about yourself, have more energy and are overall me relaxed and confident. For my physical fitness is an important thing in my life, because without it, my stress would not get released, and I would not go about my everyday life with a smile on my face.

[Finger Nails:] I chose this article because finger nails are very interesting to me. Everyone has different shaped, length and hardness of nails. I can not seem to get mine to grow. It is just interesting to me how many different diseases and germs live in nails, and how you can tell if you have a severe illness, from the shape and growth of your nail.

[Hair Coloring]:: I have never dyed my hair, and I do not really understand why people do. It jsut seems so silly to me, when people dye their hair obscene colors, for no reason. Why can't people jsut be happy with the natural color that they were given? I chose Hair coloring, because I wanted to learn more about it.

[Cleveland High School:] Considering the fact that I went to Cleveland High school, and my three brothers before me did as well, I decided to choose this article. I thought that it would be interesting to learn more about Cleveland, and see what I did not know. Cleveland was a good, school but not the best, and Wikipedia makes it sound like it was great.

[Pottery:] Pottery has always been a hobby of mine, and I first started working on the wheel and doing ceramics five years ago. The formation of a pot, out of clay, by only using your hands is amazing and beautiful to me. There have been many famous and talented potters throughout the world, that have done the most amaxing work in the world. Pottery has been around for millions of years. Before our time, and before the wheel was ever thought of. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Strawberry4547 (talk • contribs) 03:29, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

Strawberry4547 (talk) 03:43, 21 May 2008 (UTC)