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Notes regarding information privacy Notes regarding Data Re-Identification (Tiffany)
 * In the way classification was categorized in the article, I thought Sexuality/Sexual Preference/Gender Identification might have been equally relevant.
 * Cable TV section:  “IP TV” not linked
 * Medical section:  HIPAA and HITECH ACT could be linked
 * Safe Harbor Program section:  “Historically, …… 95/46/EU” needs citation and links.  The section is also difficult to understand.
 * “Policy appliances”… who wrote this?? Sounds like translations into English from another language.
 * Commercial linking to Commerce an incorrect link.
 * Laws: no USA laws listed.
 * Authorities: no USA authorities listed.
 * The whole article seems poorly written and difficult to read.
 * When describing the process of de-identification, an example could be useful;
 * “Others do not think…” would be interesting to indicate who the “others” are;
 * Wow – this is much better written and cited, compared to Information Privacy.
 * Probably needs more developing, more info and citing.
 * First couple sentences in the Netflix paragraph need citing? In general, I think needs more development, and there are links that don’t appear to work.

Notes regarding Week 3 Citation training

 * I made 2 edits on the page Information Privacy wiki page
 * I insert a Notes w/ Reference section in my Sandbox