User:Strubdr/Lake Annie - Florida/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Strubdr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Strubdr/Lake_Annie_-_Florida?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Daryn, this is Lizzy, Nice job so far! Some comments, my biggest concern is the paragraph about ice cover loss. Based on location, I don't think this is as relevant to Lake Annie specifically. You need to tailor the page to be more unique to this lake in particular (which you do later in the article) but try to make this a theme throughout.

1) Lake Ecology paragraph, did you mean to write dissolved carbon? I think you might mean DO dissolved oxygen here but review that section.

2) Don't forget to make ues of the link tool when describing scientific jargon . You did a nice job linking species but you can link to lesser known limnologic terms as well.

3) Remove first person references "we" in effects of climate change sections

4) More details on Lake Annie Research, try to find specific papers etc.