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Hammona (talk) 17:42, 18 October 2018 (UTC)Article Evaluation

I chose to read an article about Soarin' which is one of the rides at Disney parks. There was nothing that distracted from the article. The article focused on Soarin' the ride and many aspects of it. The information was very relevant especially since the ride was just recently updated a few years ago. The article went through each of the versions and updates of the ride. I do not think that they missed anything and I think the article included a lot of information. I think that the article is very neutral and does not have a single dominated opinion. There are no viewpoints that are over or under represented. When I clicked on the citations all of the links worked and took me to the source they used. Based on what I read the sources seemed credible. When I looked at the talk page, there were not too many comments but there were some. Most of the comments were about how it was unrealistic for Disney to get the footage for the ride. People also commented about the details of the ride and what they th[1 ]ought was not right or not realistic. The article is related to Walt Disney World but I do not think that it is part of a project right now. Wikipedia talks about this topic in a very formal term and has a lot of information on this ride. Overall, I think that this wiki was very informative and had a lot of information about the Disney ride.

I have chosen an article on the culture of Cincinnati. This is an S rated article which means that it is a newer article that is just starting to get information. There is not much on the talk page but there are a few people making edits to the articles. I think that I will be able to contribute a lot to this article. It is interesting to research and discover all of the trendy places in Cincinnati and how our culture has changed over the years. The content that is already in the article is relevant to the topic but all of the areas could use more information. Almost every piece of information has a citation but there are some that could use more sources. I think that I would add more restaurant and entertainment suggestions.

Here are some sources I plan to use! https://www.cincinnatimagazine.com/culture/ https://cincinnatiusa.com/things-to-do/visual-arts-culture https://www.downtowncincinnati.com/exploring-downtown/downtown-cincinnati-entertainment

Here is the article I plan to use! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_of_Cincinnati

Article Plan My article currently is short and has just basic Cincinnati tourism things on it. Cincinnati's culture has changed a lot over the last decade and I plan to explore that more when adding to my article. I want to explore how Cincinnati culture has change and what it has evolved into. I am going to explain more about what there is to do in Cincinnati, the best places to eat, and what local people enjoy doing. There is not much written on the talk page so I hope that adding to the wiki will get more people to talk on it

Here are my sources. I am not sure if they are the best for this article but I definitely learned more about Cincinnati's culture and things to do in the city. I have not been able to find many scholarly articles, most of the sources are tourism websites. I just put the links because I am not sure if I am going to keep using these sources. I might change my topic if I can't find enough credible sources.

Here is the link to my google doc with the edits that I did on my article: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uZjbNdR6bAg3pdDEOjzoy59eZppnlb2YWvcS1hqNPWQ/edit?usp=sharing