User:Student0040/sandbox

Police use of deadly force in the United States - This is the article I will be editing. I will edit the lead section because it does not have a strong leading sentence that describes the topic. I will also edit the order of things and fix some organization in the article. I will add images and fix minor grammatical errors.

Outline for edits:

I want to move the frequency section and the racial patterns section to come before the databases section. All sections are important but I think when someone clicks on this page they are more interested in looking for statistics from the frequency section and the racial patterns section. In the frequency section there is a bit about the leading causes of death for young men and I want to add a statistic about leading causes for women for comparison. I want to add, "This is compared to a 0.08 per 100,000 risk of women of the same age group," after the last sentence of the first paragraph of the frequency section. This statistic is from the same source that the previous author used and that source is from my annotated bibliography as well.