User:Studentbreese/Basic ecclesial community/Dresden Norris Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Studentbreese


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Studentbreese/Basic_ecclesial_community?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Basic ecclesial community

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Well written and detailed. Perhaps add one or two more regions where CEBs had a large footing, if relevant examples still exist. In the Mexico section, "One of the main causes for the spread of base communities in the country were concerns over widespread poverty and malnutrition, in addition to the increasing gap between the ratio of Catholic priests to parishioners characteristic of all of Latin America during the 20th century: at times, an entire diocese of over 50,000 people might have only one priest; this was especially true in rural areas that were difficult to reach. " should probably be broken up into two sentences. In Guadalajara section, explain briefly or provide a link to the "See-Judge-Act" method of conscientization.