User:Studentuser65210/George Washington Carver/Petunialovescake1 Peer Review

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Studentuser65210


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 * Editing User:Studentuser65210/George Washington Carver - Wikipedia


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 * George Washington Carver - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this is a great piece to incorporate into the article. The content is relevant to the article and easy to read. I would just add in some resources that pertain to Carver's use of peanut butter and maybe some more information concerning his contribution. I am not sure if it would be necessary to add in images, unless you wanted to show the different ways in which Carver used peanut butter. It might be beneficial if you reviewed the last two sentences in terms of their structure, changing the transition "and" to "however', or "although" for example. I would also recommend when you are further along, to link several key words or phrases so that the article is easier to discover. Hopefully, some of this is helpful.