User:Studiesin.../Cult of Artemis at Brauron/Secotuff Peer Review

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 * Editing User:Studiesin.../Cult of Artemis at Brauron - Wikipedia


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 * Cult of Artemis at Brauron - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

I really likes the lead, I felt it provided a good amount of general information and highlighted why there is an article about the Cult of Artemis at Brauron.

Clarity of Article Structure

The layout of the sections and content felt good, it was easy to follow the article.

Coverage Balance

The article does not seem to try to convince the reader of any particular point of view.

The "Wrath of Artemis" Feels just a little off topic, but it's not too long so I think it's fine.

Points of view don't seem too related to the topic in this article so I don't think there are any missing view points to worry about.

Content Neutrality

I felt like the whole article did a great job of keeping a neutral tone, and providing source when talking about specifics.

Sources

I feel like the "Festivals and Rituals" section could use more references or specifics. There are a few sentences that start with "There is evidence of..." that could use specifics.