User:Stummarakota/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Kachin people

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The genocide in Myanmar has centered around the Rohingya Muslims, but news narratives have left out the Kachin people. Thus, I wanted to ensure their history was represented on Wikipedia.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section: Does not include a proper overview of the Wikipedia article and could link to other sections of the page better. Language is overemphasized and takes away from other important general information. Should include a brief overview of the history of the people and also does not link to the genocide of the Kachin people.

Content: Lacking in many places and does not include information on religion, history, human rights status, health, etc.

Tone: Maintains a neutral tone and no apparent problems with over or under representing certain views.

Sources: Most sources do not have links and main source is limited access. Should look into using more sources that are available to the public. Most sources are from academic articles and thus does not represent a wide array of sources.

Talk Page: Only 1 comment on talk page signifying a lack of evaluation of the article. Part of a couple of WikiProjects, but looks like effort isn't being put this way.

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