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Article Evaluation
Clinical Pharmacology: Ernest Cline wrote a novel that is named Ready Player One.
 * Neutral
 * Covered the qualifications one might need for becoming a clinical pharmacologists well, but they could have talked more about what a clinical pharmacologist does. Touches breifly on what they do and gave examples of branches, but I believe they could have explained it better and give more examples.
 * There are no citations at all
 * Has been rated stub class in the quality scale, and mid- importance on the importance scale
 * It stayed relevant to the topic but there is very little information

The Division of Clinical Pharmacology is translating research in order to understand the chemical synthesis process and seeking to determine the interventions of human diseases.

Article Draft Proposal
I intend to work on the article clinical pharmacology for this assignment, and the rest of the semester. I plan to explain more of the duties that a clinical pharmacologist has, and to contribute more to the section titled “branches”. The section gives some examples of branches but only briefly explains what some of them are. I want there to be a good general understanding of what all the branched are in the article. I am also thinking about adding a content box on the side, for quick general information. I would like for someone to read this page and get a good understanding on what clinical pharmacology is. The first time I read this page, I felt like if I did not already know what clinical pharmacology was, I would still have very little understanding of what it really is, and I want to change that. I want to make this article as good as I can make it.
 * https://s3.amazonaws.com/academia.edu.documents/36545506/Katzung_-_Basic_and_Clinical_Pharmacology_12th_Edition_2012.pdf?AWSAccessKeyId=AKIAIWOWYYGZ2Y53UL3A&Expires=1519315642&Signature=YRMnRxRU0yItPIcJDsU5icPK7Y4%3D&response-content-disposition=inline%3B%20filename%3Dkatzung_Basic_and_Clinical_Pharmacology.pdf
 * Clinical Pharmacology.” 2015, pp. The SAGE Encyclopedia of Pharmacology and Society.
 * Chatu, Sukhdev., and Christopher. Tofield. The Hands-on Guide to Clinical Pharmacology. 3rd ed., Wiley-Blackwell, 2010.
 * Paul G. Ambrose, Sujata M. Bhavnani, Christopher M. Rubino, Arnold Louie, Tawanda Gumbo, Alan Forrest, George L. Drusano; Pharmacokinetics-Pharmacodynamics of Antimicrobial Therapy: It's Not Just for Mice Anymore, Clinical Infectious Diseases, Volume 44, Issue 1, 1 January 2007, Pages 79–86, https://doi.org/10.1086/510079

Feedback: Try and find citations for the work already published on the page and look at the information on that specific website and see what you can find. Expand on the branches part of the article. Also, adding a quick facts content box is a good idea for people viewing the article. Maybe find some more pictures too. Also, looking at the external links could give you a good start o finding more information.[/User:Stunall/sandbox/articledraft /User:Stunall/sandbox/articledraft]

Vetter's Feedback
Hey Sadie,

This is a really nice proposal, and I appreciate the very specific developments you have targeted for this article. I can help you with the infobox - and I think that that itself should be worth a little more in terms of word count because its an important visual and organizational feature. The other improvements you are suggesting all make sense. And it looks like the sources you've identified are textbooks or general guides? Those are going to be good to work with for this particular assignment. Your next step is really just to start looking through your sources (use the Table of Contents, index, and other organizational cues to help you skim and get right to the best info) and begin to identify passages that include the information you want to bring into Wikipedia. Bring those passages to class on Tuesday (either in print or digital form) and we'll start working on summarizing and putting the information into your own words. We'll talk more about this during your conference, but I think you have got a great start here. Good job on this proposal! - Dr. Vetter