User:Subaitar34/Life Imprisonment in the United States/Kristiedelvalle Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Subaitar34
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Subaitar34/sandbox

Content

 * The content added made the paragraphs more clear and added several of important details that the original draft was lacking. All details are up-to-date and relevant to the other details in the paragraph. Great job mentioning current movements on social media pertaining to the content.

Tone and Balance

 * The content was neutral despite speaking about campaigns that are more liberal. No claims appeared to have a bias towards any position. Information added doesn't seem to persuade anyone towards any position because all details are factual.

Sources and References

 * Each sentence is backed by a thorough source that reflects the content on the article. The sources are not old and still relevant to current information. All links work for each citing.

Organization

 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? The parts added are well-written and easy to ready which is great for people just trying to get the basic information. No spelling errors or grammatical errors found.

Overall impressions

 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?The content added really completed the information that was already there. The writing was very accessible and brought more current/ up-to-date information that the original work needed. The sources were properly used and the paragraph added to the end of the section really encompassed the details that came before.