User:Subi6197/Hami melon/Aby25duh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Subi6197


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Subi6197/Hami_melon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Subi6197/Hami_melon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article about hami melons are very brief and does not elaborate much about the historical importance of the hami melon in relation to Chinese culture. There is no specification about the western region's name, it is written in Chinese but there is no phonetic pronunciation or English equivalent that is given. The ethnic group, "Uyghurs" was misspelled in one of the sentences along with a few grammatical mistakes.