User:Subi6197/Hami melon/Rshls Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Subi6197


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Subi6197/Hami melon


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hami melon

Evaluate the drafted changes
Introduces the history of hami melon, its origin and storage methods. There is a clear beginning that introduces what the article is about, and there is a picture. Added content is topic-related and neutral. Other wikipedias are cited in the references