User:Subzero10/Lil Baby/Subzero10 Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Lil Baby - Wikipedia


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Evaluate the drafted change
Lead


 * The lead has been updated, it has listed all of Lil baby old albums to new albums he has produce since being a American rapper.
 * The lead does include and introductory sentence that talks about his path to success by introducing Lil Baby as an artist in the first couple of sentences.
 * The article does introduce the problems in the criminal justice system that Lil Baby has faced but they didn't introduce it in the lead.
 * The lead overall talks about Lil baby as a rapper and his path to a successful rap career.

Structure


 * The section in this article are well organized. The article starts as introducing Lil Baby and informing people about what Lil Baby does in the rap industry. They follow up with his hit records in the lead and his best singles he has produced over his career, and talks about his first album to his recent current album. Then the article gives a summery of his early life, but they should of added his criminal encounters in the lead you could say. Then they really go in depth with what label Lil Baby is sign to and what albums and songs he has produced. They structure out there article pretty good.

Balance


 * The balance of this articles is good and precise but the articles talks a lot about his rap career, the article could of mention about what Lil Baby has did for his community and how he helped change his high school around in his community. The article could of talked about the scholarship he has given out over the years so kids could go to college for free and there school be paid for.


 * The articles mainly gets a reader attention, even if you don't like rap you could be interested in this article.

Neutral Content


 * The author does make neutral content of adding in Lil Baby wife ,(Jayda) and his two sons (Jason ,Loyal) this information shouldn't be mention because your trying to keep the article about Lil Baby not his personal life. I can't really guess who wrote this author but I do know whoever wrote this article had to be a little knowledgeable of Lil Baby in the rap industry.
 * And I removed a lot of that: it's chatty celebrity trivia. The children aren't notable by themselves, and there is no need to bring their names into the article. Dr Aaij (talk) 02:31, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * The author does add in a a shooting that happen in Birmingham AL, that shouldn't be added because Lil Baby had nothing to do with the shooting he was just there performing a concert and a shooting broke out. That content is not really needed for the article. Overall this is a neutral article but just have some little minor errors of information introduce in the article.
 * Good point: I scrapped that entire section--it was nonsense. Dr Aaij (talk) 02:31, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Reliable Sources


 * You have a Youtube link for a source and that is not a reliable resource to use . https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ckj0ixgZE8&ab_channel=95G
 * That whole section needs to be rewritten, with better sourcing. Dr Aaij (talk) 02:31, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
 * In the lead they forgot to cite there sources at the end to show there sources they use to gather there information.
 * The lead doesn't need to cite references, as long as the article does.
 * Other than the Youtube link for that particular source, the material for references this article has gather are good reliable sources because they come out of news article that are well known that are reliable.