User:Such0051/Iron Springs Bog SNA/Drumm065 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Such0051


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Such0051/Iron_Springs_Bog_SNA?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iron Springs Bog SNA

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You guys have a really great draft here thus far! I think you do a great job of thoroughly explaining the topic and you provide great evidence and a very balanced, neutral presentation of facts. The one comment I would make is to make some of the information a little more digestible and broad for a wider audience. You go into fantastic detail, but it might be good to make it more of a jumping off point for people to delve deeper into the topic rather than a comprehensive review of data.