User:Such0051/Iron Springs Bog SNA/RaineRuthanneWay Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ianccoff, Such0051


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Such0051/Iron_Springs_Bog_SNA?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iron Springs Bog SNA

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought the lead section was concise and gave the information needed. The one thing I would say about the content is I wouldn't have chosen to write about the person who conducted the research studies. So instead of saying "this person did research" you can skip to a factual statement of what that research showed. For the future I think finding a map of the area would be helpful for visualizing what the article is talking about when it mentions a specific area. The content for the rest of the article is well written and clear. I noticed one of the articles is from 1953, that might be a bot out of date.