User:Suhib almasmoom/sandbox

Basic Concept
The article talks about plates tectonics in general and showing key principal to theory of plate tectonics.

Alternation
they could write a separate article about the plate tectonics in celestial planets where more and detailed information is provided about known planets such as Venus.

Written Part of the article
the successful part was talking about the debatable theory about an active plate tectonics in Venus in a part of its history.

the improve-able part was giving one explanation about the lack of plate tectonics in Venus, where more theories could be useful.

Visual Part of the article
the successful part was putting multiple figures about the plate tectonics and their mechanism.

the improve-able part was adding at least a simple figure about the planet structure of Venus.

Basic Concept
The article talks about the atmosphere of Venus and what its components such as Carbon dioxide, also it talks about the clouds forming and why the atmosphere on Venus is hotter and denser than earth.

Alternation
the article could use more case studies about proposed missions or mission already went to Venus in order to clarify the idea and propose new ideas about expeditions in Venus.

Written Part of the article
the successful part was explaining some of the theories about why the atmosphere of Venus is different than earth although they are similar in many ways.

the improve-able part was talking about the life on Venus even more and propose some ideas because earth and Venus have a lot in common which kind of making Venus a good place for life.

Visual Part of the article
the successful part was putting multiple figures about Venus's atmosphere such as figures about the clouds on Venus.

the improve-able part was adding few more figures about the proposed missions and how they will over come the hot atmosphere problem when they land on Venus.

Basic Concept
The article talks about telescopic observations and visiting spacecrafts to Venus such as flybys, lander, balloons and orbiters to explore the atmosphere of Venus for scientific purposes because Venus is similar to Earth.

Alternation
the authors could add a specific section on the valuable information that we learned from these explorations and how it helped us understand the atmosphere and compare it to Earth, and how it contribute to space colonization.

Written Part of the article
the successful part was explaining each of the ways that we used in order to explore Venus like flybys and balloons.

the improve-able part was talking about key missions and how they encounter the harsh atmosphere of Venus, plus talking about more about the new ideas presented to surpass the harsh atmosphere in Venus.

Visual Part of the article
the successful part was listing all the mission intended to Venus in Table and organize it by year intervals which made easier to read and locate specific mission that you look for.

the improve-able part was adding more pictures of Venus surface or data collected from devices sent to Venus.