User:Sukie0205/Margaret Benson/Nosytg Peer Review

Content
The updated information from her early life makes sense as additional information and is placed well in my opinion. You seem to be filling a large gap in the existing article which is amazing. Notably you have provided sources for the family information which is missing from the current article.

The way you have implemented your research in the existing content smoothly is good, I read your draft and had to double check which parts you were adding because it flows very well.

Tone/Balance/References
This tone feels very neutral and well researched. Nothing seems to be guiding my opinion or convincing me of any stance. The references I followed look well vetted and mostly accessible. I also do not feel that any information is plagiarized or poorly worded in its implementation in the article.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sukie0205


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sukie0205/Margaret_Benson?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Margaret Benson

Overall
I think you are on a the right track and have made strong progress in improving the article. Your google doc is well put together and i think you all have some good information to continue adding. I also think your reorganization of the information works well and will set up the article for easy updates in the future.

Peer Review Response
Thank you very much for reviewing my work! I appreciate the feedback and it's great to hear that I'm on the right track. My plans going forward are to add some more information and then to work on integrating my work with Katie's work. There is one specific additional source I have to take a look at, which Dr. Sheppard found for us recently. I'm also going to do a little more searching for information just in case there's anything I can add. I'm considering adding a photo of Margaret and Janet near the "Personal Life" section. Once Katie and I have both wrapped up working on our individual drafts, we're going to put them together in one sandbox to make sure all of the article works together and it flows from one person's writing to the next.