User:Sundance20/Franklin Barbecue/UWCLStudentSpring2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sundance20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sundance20/Franklin_Barbecue?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Franklin Barbecue

Evaluate the drafted changes
I enjoyed reading the changes you made to this article.

I thought separating out the "Awards and Honors" was a great idea. There are enough in there that it warrants its own section. Plus the "Notable Patrons" section is a fun addition as well.

But it was the "Food" and "Fire and Reopening" sections that I think were the best additions. Those felt like they really rounded out the article more and makes it feel much more whole. The original article feels too light, and I think it's the addition of these sections that help it the most.

Overall, everything is extremely well-cited. Nice work on that.

I didn't see any additions to the bibliography. I think we're supposed to add our sources in there too.

Great job!