User:Sunflower110902/Community organizing in immigrant communities/Laylagoldberg19 Peer Review

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sunflower110902
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sunflower110902/Community organizing in immigrant communities
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Evaluate the drafted changes
- You effectively highlight the various sectors (health, legal, housing) where community organizing is vital, showcasing the broad impact of these efforts.

- You emphasize the empowerment of affected groups through community organizing, stressing the importance of giving them a voice to influence change

- By specifying the impact on immigrant communities, you underline the relevance of community organizing to a key demographic facing significant challenges

- You could include more specific examples or data to substantiate the claims about the effectiveness of community organizing.

- You mention a variety of methods but do not delve into specific strategies used in community organizing, which could provide a clearer picture of how these efforts are implemented.