User:Sunflower110902/Community organizing in immigrant communities/McGSoc Peer Review

General info
Sunflower110902
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sunflower110902/Community organizing in immigrant communities
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The content provides the original article with a strong, concise, and relevant lead section compared to the original. I cannot think of a better lead section and feel this is good to go!