User:Sunflower110902/Undocumented youth in the United States/Laylagoldberg19 Peer Review

General info
Sunflower110902
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sunflower110902/Undocumented youth in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your additions to the article provide more of a detailed understanding of the specific challenges faced by undocumented students in higher education. These additions also offer practical solutions that institutions can implement to support these students more effectively.

The statistical evidence, like the reference to a decline in GPA among undocumented students, provides helpful and concrete data to support the claims about educational regression.

Introducing the concept of an Undocumented Student Program and UndocuAlly training as solutions offers actionable steps that institutions can take and provide a strong argument for their adoption and expansion across more educational settings.

- The detail about student panels in UndocuAlly workshops where students share their experiences is essential as it brings authentic voices into the conversation

While the additions are informative, make sure that they integrate smoothly with the existing content of the Wikipedia article -- it would be beneficial to connect these additions more explicitly with ongoing legislative changes or debates around immigration policy in the U.S. to provide a clearer link between individual experiences and national policy.