User:Sunflower110902/Undocumented youth in the United States/McGSoc Peer Review

General info
Sunflower110902
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sunflower110902/Undocumented youth in the United States
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The copyedits were done well and made the flow of the paragraph easier to follow while properly setting up continuity to the next paragraph. Everything in the second paragraph is clear, concise, and informative. My only recommendation is a section header for the second paragraph because it specifically talks about the Undocumented Student Program (example of section header: Programs for Undocumented Students). This way the reader can differentiate that the paragraph specifically talks about existing programs that families and students, as well as schools, should know about.