User:Sunflowerkarli/Running amok/Lauralim13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sunflowerkarli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunflowerkarli/Running_amok?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Running amok

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, this was a pretty good description of what running amok means as well as how it ties into the whole article as a whole. I do think that more sources could be found on this topic to make this part of your article stronger but other than that what you have so far is pretty good. It also does not contain a biased point of view. it also contains a neutral tone which is very good, so i would really focus on finding more sources to make that part of the article stronger, but other than that very good job.